Cassus Animus

I walk this road, I walk this road. Alone in travels, travels. The light does not show, does not show. I'm escorted to the gallows, gallows. Invisible? Not today, nor ...

This is an awesome bit of writing, the word choice, the flow...everything mended well together to form an exquisite piece of poetry. I really enjoyed the outline all the way ...

This is pretty solid for the intended purpose. Really I can't find anything more to say about it, aside from a very well written piece with a lot of thought ...

Pretty eye opening as a whole, kind of gives you a new view of a leaf with images such as "The leaves laugh". I like the innocence in the piece ...

Pretty emotional, so because of that I will simply critique one aspect. The way some of the lines flow into the next is off-setting to me as they are complete ...

Wow, this is a lot better than the other one I was at...don't worry already scanned the rules (2 reply to 1 rule, which is odd usually I've seen 3 ...

I'm new, yep...I write lyrics mainly but dabble in a bit of poetry, one in the same in some aspects. Interested with the community, seems to be pretty active. Catch ...